They're mouths aren't even animated right with their speech. But this the Best turd I've seen in a month. lol, the guy in the blue jacket looks Exactly like Nick from my school.
How long did this take you? Really good thought.
This is beast, could of been a little bit longer though.
You put in some effort, but it was very ametuer. You tried and thats good. Try better next time. Sound is crucial, you needed to make the animation better, and more digital design than as blank background, and you need a preloader. Still, nice try.
These guys remind me of my friend who a downer, and he got from captain, to nearly colonel in a month. Very funny though, except for the part with them getting boners.
But it needs more work, the video needs more detail, and the video should be longer. Summary: you don't need to rush, fine tune your flash until it's at the peak of perfection, something a user could make in two days and have a 2.57 score, could become a months project and have a 4.32 score, hope it helped.
Please make more halo movies. Epic flash man. ;)
This is cool
It's good, for an ametuer, I would add a background, more weapons, and better animation, also the green guy owned too much, that makes everyone know that the green guy is going to win, if your going to play it that way, I'd add a twist at the end, like another guy shows up and lends the blue guy a hand, or something. Hope you learned something
Thank you for that review, ill try to make a better one in the future.
Kinda short but funny, good job!!
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